What I need comments on is a speech I wrote for Angel. He's discovered that Kathryn and he are soulmates (and kudos to him for not running a mile) and he's trying to smash all her emotional barriers.
After about a week of trying to talk to her, she snaps and yells at him to leave her alone. She asks why is Dead Boy (as she calls him) so obsessed with her. This is his response
“The very angel’s in Heaven pale in the light of your beauty. Your beauty that transcends all language, all emotion and all explanation. You are the sun that warms my skin and the moon that blesses and caresses me in the ink of the night. You are the stars that twinkle for eternity with no prejudice or cares. You are the very air that I breathe, the water I drink to survive, the only person that keeps me alive. When I’m alone and the darkness threatens to swallow me, I see your face and suddenly that’s all it takes…I am all right. When I dream of your face, all of my pain vanishes and I don’t want to die anymore. I love you. I love you so much that I could die. I love you so much that I can’t bear the pain I am in without you. I ache and burn because I have never felt the purity of your touch. When I am with you…I feel human. I feel perfect because of the way you look at me.”
I need replies on this! Because I was going to use it later but it seems a bit much for him to be saying to a girl who would rather kill him than admit she loved him. Is it? Help me peoples! Esp. Donielle and Ruu. After all, they are the Goddesses of Angst Bishi Boi's, yes you two!
Things to do:
*Go to Belfast to buy material for my tunic and dress
*Email Laura before she explodes
*Nudge Zalan into talking to me some more
*Re-write all of the Kathryn story
*Add more to my fanfiction.net library.
*Buy material to make Jenni's Tigger stuffed thing
*Write more yaoi
*Make Angel a real character instead of this figure that Kathryn blames for leaving her but loves desperately
That's all me thinks! Nighty woderful people!
After about a week of trying to talk to her, she snaps and yells at him to leave her alone. She asks why is Dead Boy (as she calls him) so obsessed with her. This is his response
“The very angel’s in Heaven pale in the light of your beauty. Your beauty that transcends all language, all emotion and all explanation. You are the sun that warms my skin and the moon that blesses and caresses me in the ink of the night. You are the stars that twinkle for eternity with no prejudice or cares. You are the very air that I breathe, the water I drink to survive, the only person that keeps me alive. When I’m alone and the darkness threatens to swallow me, I see your face and suddenly that’s all it takes…I am all right. When I dream of your face, all of my pain vanishes and I don’t want to die anymore. I love you. I love you so much that I could die. I love you so much that I can’t bear the pain I am in without you. I ache and burn because I have never felt the purity of your touch. When I am with you…I feel human. I feel perfect because of the way you look at me.”
I need replies on this! Because I was going to use it later but it seems a bit much for him to be saying to a girl who would rather kill him than admit she loved him. Is it? Help me peoples! Esp. Donielle and Ruu. After all, they are the Goddesses of Angst Bishi Boi's, yes you two!
Things to do:
*Go to Belfast to buy material for my tunic and dress
*Email Laura before she explodes
*Nudge Zalan into talking to me some more
*Re-write all of the Kathryn story
*Add more to my fanfiction.net library.
*Buy material to make Jenni's Tigger stuffed thing
*Write more yaoi
*Make Angel a real character instead of this figure that Kathryn blames for leaving her but loves desperately
That's all me thinks! Nighty woderful people!